STORY NOTES BY JULIE GRAY - $750

An in-depth element-by-element analysis and evaluation of your script with examples, suggestions, page notes and a follow-up brainstorming session.
Includes: 5 pages of notes, 1 hour phone session, Unlimited email access for 30 days.

STORY NOTES - $400

An in-depth element-by-element analysis and evaluation of your script with examples, suggestions, page notes and a follow-up brainstorming session.
Includes: 5 pages of notes, 1 hour phone session.

JUNIOR STORY NOTES - $300

Analysis and evaluation of your script with examples and suggestions.
Includes: 3 pages of notes, 30 minute phone session.

Note: Unless other arrangements are made, phone consultation must be taken advantage of within ten days of receipt of notes. After this time period, writer waives the consultation.

BASIC COVERAGE - $150

Straight up production company style coverage. Brief and to the point.
Includes: 1 ½ pages of comments.

BASIC COVERAGE PLUS - $200

Basic Coverage plus two+ pages of specific page notes with reactions and suggestions.

THE HOLLYWOOD MILITARY ADVISOR - $200

Work with a 20 year army veteran with over ten years of experience as a military advisor in the entertainment industry. Includes a cover to cover review looking for accuracy in military jargon, military relationships, use of equipment, and history. The requester will receive a written report of the findings as well as a 30 minute phone conference.

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SPANISH TRANSLATION - $1200

Scripts translated from Spanish to English or English to Spanish by Bernadette Rivero, fluent Spanish speaker, writer and story analyst specializing in Latin American film projects.

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EXPRESS OVERNIGHT - $200

When you absolutely need it overnight. Submit your PDF or FD script by 4pm Pacific Daylight Time and receive 1½ pages of notes by 10:30am the following day.

TWO HEADS ARE BETTER THAN ONE

Basic coverage by a number of readers. Includes 1 ½ pages of notes from each analyst:
- 2 Reader Package - $250  
- 3 Reader Package - $350  

FOLLOW-UP REVIEW - $120

Wondering how you did with that last set of notes? Complete your rewrite within 90 days and the reader of your choice will do a follow-up set of notes. 1 ½ pages of notes

FIRST ACT NOTES - $75

Everyone knows that you only have a few pages to grab the reader. Is your first act compelling enough? Are you setting up your characters, world and the crux of the conflict? Are you headed in the right direction? Here’s how to find out.

$75 for one page of comprehensive notes, element by element.