THE HOLLYWOOD MILITARY ADVISOR - $200  NEW!!!

Work with a 20 year army veteran with over ten years of experience as a military advisor in the entertainment industry. Includes a cover to cover review looking for accuracy in military jargon, military relationships, use of equipment, and history. The requester will receive a written report of the findings as well as a 30 minute phone conference.

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SPANISH TRANSLATION - $1200  NEW!!!

Scripts translated from Spanish to English or English to Spanish by Bernadette Rivero, fluent Spanish speaker, writer and story analyst specializing in Latin American film projects.

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THINK OUTSIDE THE BOX - $500  NEW!!!

Work one-on-one with Margaux Froley Outhred, 2007 Warner Brothers Television Fellow and current CW staff writer.

Submit two scripts: an existing show spec script and an original pilot or any combination and receive 2 pages of notes for each plus a summary page reviewing the viability of both scripts relative to the market. Includes a 30 minute follow-up phone consult with Margaux to discuss your scripts, your career and what comes next.

ASK THE THERAPIST - $125  NEW!!!

Want to know what really makes your characters tick? What is your main character’s flaw from a psychological perspective? What emotional damage motivates your antagonist to be so bad? Or how about a little support for you, the writer? The doctor is in.

A 30 minute phone consultation with Jeff Cotton, MFT $125

FIRST ACT NOTES - $75  NEW!!!

Everyone knows that you only have a few pages to grab the reader. Is your first act compelling enough? Are you setting up your characters, world and the crux of the conflict? Are you headed in the right direction? Here’s how to find out.

$75 for one page of comprehensive notes, element by element.

BASIC COVERAGE PLUS - $200  NEW!!!

Basic Coverage plus two+ pages of specific page notes with reactions and suggestions.